Can you guess where I am?
My mystery place
I go to my favourite place. I think eel’s are splashing,
I sort of hear sparrows squawking like pelicans.
I hear water banging together. It smells fishy.
I feel squishy mud beneath my feet.
It is noisy here like a hippopotamus watering hole.
I feel sharp things on my feet like glass.
Where could I be?
I sort of hear sparrows squawking like pelicans.
I hear water banging together. It smells fishy.
I feel squishy mud beneath my feet.
It is noisy here like a hippopotamus watering hole.
I feel sharp things on my feet like glass.
Where could I be?
Hi Kyle,
ReplyDeleteI love all of the amazing describing words that you have used. Well done!
This is a hard one. Is your favourite place down by the creek?
I have sent you a quick email about your blog.
You must be eeling somewhere! Maybe near your house. Great work. Kyle. You have used some great language in this piece of writing. I like the way you used descriptive language like 'squishy mud beneath my feet' it sounds very fun where ever you are!
ReplyDeleteHi Kyle
ReplyDeleteWell it's definitely somewhere wet, maybe a river or stream where you will find eels. I enjoyed reading your writing as it includes great language about what you can see, hear, smell and feel. I wonder if you can taste anything in the air?